Hi everybody!
My website is up and running and I would love to get everyone's feedback.
Please check it out and let me know what you think!
www.buymyhousealready.com
Hi everybody!
My website is up and running and I would love to get everyone's feedback.
Please check it out and let me know what you think!
www.buymyhousealready.com
Pefect. As soon as I post this the website goes down. Give it some time please. thanks
I made a quick video critique for you. :)
There are some things I missed (ie making bullets more emotional, benefit driven, knowing your customer avatar better, etc)...but I think this should give you a nice start:
http://www.viddler.com/explore/rachelrofe/videos/3/
Hope it helps!
Rach
P.S. So Weird! I just upgraded Screenflow, and now it says "Demo" - will have to fix that, but the content's still there for you. :)
Rachel,
Thank you for the video reply. That will help me tremendously and give me some great ideas for the site. That was so cool of you to do a video critique, I've never seen anyone do that before!
Best,
Nick
I like what the site had to offer Nick. It's flashy and easy to use. My advice to improve the site would be to provide a more visible link for investors and your "employment opportunities" section. Prospects have to actively search and find the small links on the bottom of the page. I don't think that's a good thing.