Letter to Absentee Owner: Proof Read (Try #2)
Hello All,
This is just a second try from the initial proof read under the post "Letter to Absentee Owner: Proof Read"
Tell me whether it looks better than the last and everything and anything you notice that I SHOULD improve about the message (format or content). Here it is:
Hello _____,
I drove by your property at _____ in Leominster. It has potential and the neighborhood does too. I’m interested in making you a cash offer to buy and hope you consider. If you’re about it and you're interested in making a quick pile of cash give me a call, shoot a text or send an email at the contact info provided below.
God Speed,
(Space for Signature)
Patrick Sullivan
Cell: [REMOVED]
Email: [REMOVED]