I'm trying to make an introduction, and placed it in the wrong place.

Does anyone have a paragraph or two that would fit for this scenario?  

My gut tells me to walk away from this but I only have the paragraph of info you posted.

Nice introduction of who the actual principals are and short bios   ( fraudsters dont do that generally) but some bigger companies dont either.. but its something I personally like to see.2.

@Tommy Niggeling, thank you for that introduction, and welcome to BiggerPockets.I hope you continue to learn from everyone on this platform.If you have not, great books to read are: Rich Dad, Poor Dad The Millionaire Next Door Cash Flow Quadrant Tax Free Wealth Set For Life Rental Property Investing The Millionaire Real Estate Investor The REAL Book of Real Estate So Good They Can’t Ignore YouYou are more than welcome to reach out if you have any questions.Good Luck and go make it happen!

Feel free to send me a PM and I'll set up an introduction.

I copied some stuff from an early chapter for my second paragraph but Greene goes into much more detail.

I would hope you have a Realtor and aren't relying on random people spitballing on a message board with not a clue of your circumstances beyond what you've divulged in a few paragraphs. 

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