Feedback on my voicemail greeting - for finding deals to wholesale

Feedback on my voicemail greeting - for finding deals to wholesale

Investor · Green Valley, AZ · Member since 2013 · 27 posts · 3 votes

Hi everyone ,

I've already sent out some mailers, so I need to get a voicemail message up quick!  READY AIM FIRE!  What do you think of this?

Hello, you've reached Ryan DeLange. I'm sorry I've missed your call. You're likely calling about selling a home, so I want to let you know a couple of things. I'm not a real estate agent, so you won't have to pay any agent fees. You'll be paid cash, which can certainly make things easier. And, finally, you don't need to do any repairs, because I'll buy your home in 'as is' condition. So, please leave a brief message and I'll be happy to call you back as soon as I can. 

Oh, and also, if anyone in Tucson is looking to buy a wholesale deal in Tucson, let me know.  The downside is that I'm inexperienced and might not close a deal, but the upside is that you could be the first on my list!

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  • Investor · Green Valley, AZ · Member since 2013 · 27 posts · 3 votes
    11y

    Here it is recorded.  I'd love honest feedback.  

    https://www.evernote.com/shard/s342/sh/e0f9a5fe-24...

  • Investor · Miami, FL · Member since 2013 · 807 posts · 475 votes
    11y
    With all do respect Ryan, I would have hung up before the end. I think you should just keep it short and leave the explaining to when you are speaking to the person directly.
  • Investor · Glendale, AZ · Member since 2015 · 113 posts · 47 votes
    11y

    Hi Ryan,

    I would keep it short and sweet, if they are calling you they probably already know that info because it should be on your mailers already, I am assuming? If you leave any info I would leave info such as "txt for a quicker response" if that is the case or "I return all calls from 12pm to 1pm" or whatever time frame you have. I know top agents/investors do this so they can focus and not be interupted by calls or emails and then again others answer every call or at least try to and if they cant they have a short voicemail.  

    -John

  • Wholesaler · Scottsdale, AZ · Member since 2015 · 9 posts · 2 votes
    11y

    Hello Ryan,

    The great news is that your phone is ringing with your mailers and you are taking the steps to do business. There will be many types of personalities that will respond and whats important is the content of the message. Keeping your message short is fine for you are much better off assembling a few short questions that will open the conversation wider when you actually speak with the callers "live". 

    Andrew

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