I would encourage you, at minimum, to prompt it to lose some of the major tells: the emoji/numbers you used, the use of bold font, and the em dashes. 

Starting off with a build-to-rent in Burleson is a bold and strategic move DFW continues to show strong fundamentals for long-term rental demand, especially in suburbs with solid school districts and job growth.New construction rentals can offer lower maintenance and stronger tenant appeal, but they come with their own learning curve, especially around timelines, permitting, and lease-up strategy.

Sometimes bold is the ticket for some wow factor.

m aiming to be in life  I'm making a bold career shift-from working in the restaurant industry to pursuing real estate investing full-time.

Big-bold art.

The Truth is built for live performances providing a bold, modern stage for artists and fans alike.

- Time Capital Bookkeeping (REI since 2019)I’d agree with the above, especially the bolded section.

Lead boldly.

People respect bold transitions.3️⃣ Learn the capital stack and creative finance side.

Obviously, the numbers in bold are all variables that can be changed - You get the idea.