Investor · NJ · Member since 2023 · 32 posts · 12 votes
Hi BP community,
I’m a first-time short-term rental host and recently listed my property on both Airbnb and VRBO. I'm learning as I go and would truly appreciate your expert feedback to help me improve. I'm open to all suggestions on how to make the listing more appealing and boost bookings.
This looks so great and shows how important intentional design is in short-term rentals.
The layout looks super functional, open, and airy. It feels cohesive, like someone had a clear vision for how guests should feel and move through the space.
Lighting is another strong point. It makes the space feel welcoming and elevated. It's funny how many people overlook bedside lighting. I am a big before bed reader, and find small lamps super important once I am there.
It shows how much design can impact the overall vibe and guest experience. The property makes you want to hang out, relax, and really enjoy being there. Definitely something more STR owners should prioritize.
I agree with @Trent Reeve about wanting more color or art on the walls but I can see how it might be difficult with the A frame slanted walls. I agree that a peel and stick wall paper, mural, or even a soft tapestry like art that can be secured at the bottom and top might help. I enjoy the pops of color but maybe adding in a pattern with color vs a solid could also help visually. Such a small critique as everything looks great!
1 - too many pictures. im a big believer in less is more. for example, you have 10 pictures of the game room, 7 of the kitchen, you have a picture of just a nightstand with a lamp. also, add captions to pictures so people know what they are looking at.
2 - get something on the walls. they are plain, get something on there that will help people remember your place as they sift through multiple properties. Maybe artwork, maybe a mural (happywall.com has some murals/wallpaper for example)
3 - your listing shows 8 people, but for eating you only have 6 seats. what happens if 8 people are there? where do they eat?
4 - that lighted mirror/dresser table, to me, isnt a dedicated workspace. I am a remote worker many times and that would not work.
5 - you say that all cars need to be registered, but dont mention any fees. If there is a fee, you need to have that amount in the description now I believe.
Now after all that, great looking place, good use of outdoor space, great area pictures. maybe add a high level picture that shows the property in relation to any attractions or hotspots (lake, ski lift, casino, family attractions) so people can see they are in the middle of everything.
This looks so great and shows how important intentional design is in short-term rentals.
The layout looks super functional, open, and airy. It feels cohesive, like someone had a clear vision for how guests should feel and move through the space.
Lighting is another strong point. It makes the space feel welcoming and elevated. It's funny how many people overlook bedside lighting. I am a big before bed reader, and find small lamps super important once I am there.
It shows how much design can impact the overall vibe and guest experience. The property makes you want to hang out, relax, and really enjoy being there. Definitely something more STR owners should prioritize.
I agree with @Trent Reeve about wanting more color or art on the walls but I can see how it might be difficult with the A frame slanted walls. I agree that a peel and stick wall paper, mural, or even a soft tapestry like art that can be secured at the bottom and top might help. I enjoy the pops of color but maybe adding in a pattern with color vs a solid could also help visually. Such a small critique as everything looks great!
@Renee Krystek Thank you so much for the thoughtful feedback! I'm really glad the lighting stood out — your point about bedside lamps is a great reminder, especially for guests who love to read. I’ll definitely keep that in mind for future updates. Appreciate your kind words!
Thank you so much for the kind words and encouragement! I'm really glad you noticed the first photo with the cabin name — I wanted it to make a strong first impression. Appreciate you taking the time!
Thank you so much for the detailed feedback — really helpful stuff!
1. I don’t currently have space for 8 at the dining table, but we do have extra chairs available.
2. The table with the lighted mirror is actually a dresser, but I appreciate your point — we do have a desk setup in the main bedroom that I’ll make sure to highlight better.
3. Good catch on the parking — I’ll clarify that in the listing.
4. The idea of showing the property in relation to nearby attractions is a great suggesstion. I’m definitely going to work on that.
Really appreciate you taking the time to share all this!
Thank you so much for the detailed feedback — really helpful stuff!
1. I don’t currently have space for 8 at the dining table, but we do have extra chairs available.
2. The table with the lighted mirror is actually a dresser, but I appreciate your point — we do have a desk setup in the main bedroom that I’ll make sure to highlight better.
3. Good catch on the parking — I’ll clarify that in the listing.
4. The idea of showing the property in relation to nearby attractions is a great suggesstion. I’m definitely going to work on that.
Really appreciate you taking the time to share all this!
for the desk setup, in your Airbnb listing, it is listed under the Bedroom 3 description, that is why i mentioned that dresser. After going back, i do see the desk in the master bedroom pictures. I didnt mean to come off too critical if i did. Just thinking about feedback I received on my properties when i launched them, from guests. They definitely wont hold back. also might want to consider adding "Where you will sleep" in the Airbnb listing, so people will know there is a sofa bed. I saw the sofa bed listed in the VRBO listing, but not the ABB listing.
Wow, nicely done! I agree with John, there are so many things you did right especially as a first time rental host!
I agree with Trent, if you can add some more artwork on the walls that will help. It can be tricky with an A frame, looks like it will work in the game, dining & living rooms though.
Loved reading your description but i wanted to read more. Lol. You could carry that same playful language by captioning all your photos. Rather than saying "exterior" or "property grounds", maybe consider something like "grab the marshmallows & head to the fire pit".
Since you allow 1 dog maybe consider allowing 2 dogs to increase bookings? A lot of families have more than 1 dog, that way you'll capture a bigger audience. You can always change it later as you get more bookings.
The check in time of 4pm is standard for a lot of rentals... how would you feel about changing it to 3pm while you're a new listing to encourage more bookings? You can always change it later.
Always check your rates against the competition while you're brand new, you want to be sure you're not charging more than others while you wait to build up reviews.
These are tiny little things, just trying to be helpful but it's hard because you did a wonderful job Ravi! Now you just have to wait for it to roll in.
@Monique P. Thank you so much for the kind words and thoughtful suggestions! All of your ideas are super valuable — I’m noting them down and will work on implementing them. I love your idea of playful photo captions — "grab the marshmallows" made me smile! I’ll consider adjusting the dog policy and check-in time as well. Really appreciate you taking the time to share all this — it means a lot!
@Trent Reeve Not critical at all — I truly appreciate you taking the time to point that out! You’re right, the desk being listed under Bedroom 3 must’ve caused the confusion, and I’ll fix that right away. Great catch on the sofa bed too — I hadn’t realized it was missing from the Airbnb “Where you’ll sleep” section. All of this feedback is super helpful, especially before guests start weighing in. Thanks again!
I love the overall vibe! Great job putting the listings together — here are just a couple of small suggestions:
In one of the photos, the lamp appears to be touching the ceiling and slightly tilted. Adjusting this could make the room feel more spacious and polished.
The description feels a bit AI-generated (Chat GPT)— you might consider adding a more personal touch to help guests connect emotionally with the space. A short story or memory about the home can go a long way!
You're off to a fantastic start — wishing you lots of bookings ahead!
Agree with the others, the renovation is nicely done and pics are great. Whatever is going on over the washer/dryer stuck out as weird to me. Not that it would be a hard no but I'd rather not see that unless I decide to do laundry which I never have while staying in STR. Best wishes for a successful season!
Thanks so much @Mike Grudzien, @Sameul Ahsan and @Jules Aton for checking out the listing and for all the kind words and helpful tips! Really means a lot. I'm noting everything down and will keep improving as I go. Appreciate the support!
Congrats on getting your property listed, that’s a big first step. Your photos are clear and clean, but consider adding evening shots, especially with the fire pit, to give it more warmth.
You did a great job with the space—it feels clean, thoughtful, and well-photographed. Just a couple of things you might consider: tighten up the photo set (less is more), add captions so guests know what they’re seeing, and highlight the sleeper sofa and desk a bit more clearly. Overall, it looks like a warm, inviting stay—nicely done!