Your second sentence, BTW, threw me.

Keep it factual and boring.If you’re worried about tone or liability, have an attorney send this 3–4 sentence reply.4.

So he is still a convicted felon, he just got a very light sentence.   

You're already at 22% expense, which is unrealistic in my opinion, supposedly well-managed, but then you say the value add is in operational improvements...you can have both of those things in the same sentence.

Every defendant is presumed innocent until proven guilty beyond a reasonable doubt in a court of law.If convicted, Santarelli would face a statutory maximum sentence of 20 years in federal prison.Homeland Security Investigations and the FBI are investigating this matter with assistance from the United States Securities and Exchange Commission.

This shouldn't be the last sentence of the investment overview.

If they want to send an email, then write out a few sentences.

Creativity is on the way out, and for those who think otherwise, you have no idea what creativity means.It's just a brief stop because I think what people continue to want in these forums is to hear their strategy is right or just get a one sentence area on how to be financially fee in eighteen seconds when you are 23.

Audience: Who we serve: Your place is a beach goers vacation spot for small groups Market:  (I use budget tier & location given those drive >70% of travel lodging choice) : Panama Beach - Midscale tier Submarket (who we compete with)   No beach view, walk to beach, townhome w small yard  Niche:  None currently (this is how we position a property to distinguish from our comps)Your headline - photos - price - and first 2 sentences of your listing copy should speak specifically to your niche.   

. • Have you tried a full listing refresh with new photography, title, and first 5 sentences rewritten to boost visibility?