My first apartment ad - but not getting calls

[Robert Lindsley]

Hi there,

I'm in the middle of my first tenant turnover in my first building so forgive me for such a newbie question.  I posted my first apartment on Craigslist last week but haven't got any calls.  Can you take a look at the ad and let me know your thoughts?

https://newlondon.craigslist.org/apa/6268034914.ht...

I'm wondering if there's something wrong with the ad, or if it's just off-cycle for renters right now because it's so late in the month.

Thanks!
Robert.

[Nick B.]

Your text is ok but your pictures are unflattering. You need to retake them with better light. Also, image #3 shows a door leaned against the wall and a yellow spot above the stove. These elements make bad impression! The place looks like it has not been fully made ready.

Is the bed and mattress a part of the deal? If so, do your prospective tenants want to sleep on someone's mattress? If the mattress is new, state it in the ad. If the bed is just a leftover from a previous tenant, get rid of it.

My $.02

Nick