Marketing to experienced investors

Hello, 

I have recently dived into wholesaling properties. I have kept my format very simple but I am wondering am I providing enough details. Whats the best way to market properties to cash investors? Should a SOW for the subject property be included in my email/text blasts? 

My current format: 

Here’s the deal:

• Address
• Construction type 
• ARV
• Rehab estimate
• Asking Price
• Square Footage
• Neighborhood description 
• Comp address
• Comp address

Please send best and final offer by _____

Let me know what you guys think.