Sliver Of The River - critique it please

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We just went live on VRBO today on a small family property that we want to share with others when we aren’t using it. Please look and let me know what we did good and bad please☺️

[Mona Lisa Harrison]

Good job! Cute. Love the towel "rack."

Your verbiage for "About this rental" leads with 2 negatives. How about something more like this.

River Therapy!

Come sit by the river! or ON THE RIVER on the 400 SF dock. Fish or Kayak or just snooze in the hammock. Large yard space for Fido or games. Even EAT by the river with the picnic table and BBQ pit.  Single, couple, or family - Come find your zen at Sliver by the River.

( Slope down to river is rather steep and may challenge some folks.)

Questions:

Can you add a pic of the BBQ pit and table? Kayaks? 

Is there a fishing pole or two there?

Staging idea: add some color on the dock for pics. Maybe rug, pillows. colorful cooler, plants?

Best of luck. Let us know how it goes.