Some refuse to offer altogether, fearing they get a reputation for having high rates. 

We first paid off all of or cards and pretty much stopped using them altogether.

Instead, with a Solo 401k you can be your own trustee and bypass the custodian altogether.

I almost forgot why I stopped borrowing from banks altogether 5yrs ago until a recent refi nightmare.  

For safety reasons, you might want to consider banning space heaters altogether.   

Totaling to about 1000 properties altogether.

When we filled in pools, you were required to destroy the bottom so that it wouldn't trap water and remove the walls of the pool altogether.

If you’re going to do this at all approach it from a rental point of view,  and frankly for an 850 K price tag  altogether  this does not sound like a good rental investment property.  

One LLC is likely fine (many go without LLCs altogether) and more can be added as asset quantity and/or liability increases.

Possible edits could be:Take out "I'm sorry for writing you" altogether and just start with "I'm a local landlord"Take out "If you're interested" and say "I would love to speak with you to see how I can help."