slight elevation here or gradual dip there. 

There was so much info spread over the three days mixed with sales pitching the Mastery program blended with tons of inspirational speech that you leave feeling good about the seminar but not because you learned anything valuable but because you just completed three days of very good motivational speaking.

However, truthfully, it appears you’ve used your post as a guised platform to elevate your angst because you’ve implied by your own words that Scott Trench is in a position of “power” that you need to “speak truth to” as you wrote; “I wasn’t going to ignore gender-biased language from a leader in the BP community, even if it was inadvertent, and even though it’s hard to speak truth to power.”

eg. miniature horse, apartment is on the second floor, open slat steps, no elevator, you are asked to put in an elevator or redo the steps to accommodate a horse (ramp), but structurally there is no room for a ramp or elevator. 

I see many asking for scripts, that is bad way to start, your ability to convince others must be demonstrated by knowledge in subtle ways as appropriate rather than blurting out some puffing speech.

Get a one minute elevator pitch and knock doors!

I really want to find a good elevator pitch to give people about BP.

I am ready to contact these Attys but I am hoping for some guidance on my elevator pitch to them and why they should refer me properties as well. 

It's a mix of legal-speak, figure of speech and a distancing technique, and it goes like this - "Whatever the market will bear"I hear it on this forum and others, in podcasts, REI meetings and open houses..."

The elevation of their house is about 10 feet above sea level.