Also please excuse spelling & grammar mistakes!

(the grammar is going out the door as I am angry typing lol) The whole 1 bedroom unit of the duplex is 696 sq ft so the timeline is reasonable.

I'm not trying to be the grammar police here but the way your post is written with a long run-on sentence and no punctuation is not good.

Others have already made this point but I'll just reinforce how important it is that you present something very organized, professional, and concise.Not trying to be the grammar police here but the way your original post is written is a perfect example of how not to present information to your investors.Remember that you are investing their hard earned money, and you should respect that money by understanding yourself where every single penny is going, when the money needs to be deployed, and how that money will be returned.

. *** Excuse my grammar as I am tying as I think.Cause: Sewage Backup/Clog in drain lines/Sinking belly PipeWhat Happened:1> Tenant messages me 11pm that water is leaking. 

Went through multiple revisions of the ad and I run all ads through a grammar checker just to make sure everything reads well.

(edit: grammar)The problem: I don't know the most effective way to finance this project, especially given the amount of "dead time" between building and renting.

My favorite is "Grizzlies fans have the best grammar of all sports fans"http://www.foxsports.com/nba/story/memphis-grizzlies-fans-grammar-best-of-all-sports-fans-121615

I was stating it as being the cause of my weakness in math, spelling, grammar, and in paying attention to set timed appointments as well as boring paper document details that if missed might land me in legal trouble ~ hence my apprehension about the finer details in "assigning the contract".

Not only is there so such thing as a "loan insurance fee", the other language/grammar in the email reeks of Nigerian style scams.