Coming up with the perfect business plan

[Sydney Barrett]

I'm guessing that the perfect business plan just depends on your goal but I am trying to raise money from family and friends. What do you think I should do there? Powerpoint slide?

I'm planning on talking about the opportunity (size of the market), my skills and why I would be able to bring a unique value to the industry and also how much I need and what I would do with it and how much money I think that I would make in the first year. 

Do you think that's the best approach?