Cash Investors in the SoCal Area; Santa Barbara

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Hey BP crew! I will make this short and sweet; I am currently located in Santa Barbara, CA pursuing my REI career. I plan to start building up a nice cash buyers list so I was thinking about things to say to set me apart from other typical people pursuing wholesale.... Let me know what you guys think about something along the line of this. Greetings (X investor), I am capable of discovering and providing substantially steep discounts on properties reigning between Lompoc to Ventura; but not limited to. I am not a typical wholesaler by any means. I am persistent with my strategies in finding the best deals on properties for investors. If you are a cash investor in the area I am farming, then I believe I may be able to assist you in finding great property deals to accommodate your RE agenda. My capabilities are unlimited due to my high level of determination to pick out the best deals in the market to provide for my clients. My seller's lists are established to produce high ROI's which my clients admire. My criteria is your criteria; let me know what you need and I will provide. Look forward to hearing from you soon! Best, Blake Dalessio .... Anything I should change? Is it too elementary? Could really use some feedback guys. Thanks