Need Your Opinion Guys

[Chetan Tandon]

I'm about to do email marketing so I would like all of yours opinion if it sound good what i'm about to put on my email.

We saw your advertisement for your house. Our company is looking to acquire additional houses. If you are interested in selling we would love to talk with you.

You can always contact me directly via phone or email with information listed below.

We are investors not brokers so this is not a solicitation for a listing.

Sincerely,

[Andrew Syrios]

What group of potential sellers are you sending these too? Either way, two notes:

1) Put in a call to action, i.e. "Call me today at ___". You're basically making a polite demand that will increase the number of calls you get.

2) I've heard several places that putting a P.S. in such communications is always a good idea. Either make it a call to action or sweeten the offer (i.e. we'll pay closing costs or something). Often times people will skim the text, but they will almost always read the P.S. At least so I've heard.