to me, it's ok if it's a little long winded at first, as long as it opens up the opportunity for my partner and I to communicate to each other what kind of business we are creating, rather than just getting started.So, for my feedback to your mission statement, I think it's good to have the mission statement, and I think it's pretty good because it seems like it helped you establish what you were going to do in your business. 

Thanks for the feedback.

Thanks for your feedback and correct my statement.

@J Scott Thanks for the feedback.

Thank you all for the prompt feedback.

@Michael StroupCouple of questions/comments to provide better feedback:1.

I also posted a related thread about this to get some general feedback as well.Thanks again for the tips on selling with no capital gains; I hope I'll be able to go that route.

Feedback on the current strategies we are implementing.

I really appreciated everyone's feed back I am a quick learner and after looking at the numbers I originally stated it sure would scare me off if I were the HML.

Any feedback is appreciated.