(just kidding, I did not say that last sentence)Rep: It will take about 3 weeks before you get an email about your eligibility. 

<<<--- Read this sentence twice. 

In the first sentence you say "it has made me into a savvy CRE investor"Then in your last sentence you note "I expect to recoup my training fees in my first deal"...Can you clarify?

In addition, the most you could be held liable for (per your cardholder agreement) is $50, though it is very unlikely any card company wouldn't absorb that cost.By the way, looking at what I wrote again, I would change one sentence... from:"This merchant violated the Fair Credit Billing Act by not only misrepresenting their services, but by failing to render said services after collecting my money."

But in the time it takes to insult someone and get rid of them, you might have been able to give your two sentence pitch on why they are wrong for not considering your services, and how you benefit the deal.

This sentence screams midwest markets.

Google amigo Damn not even 1-2 sentences to help out a fellow investor.

I'm not the one here who is using the strongly worded, nasty sentences and phrases directed at those who don't agree with him. 

Ken Durden Could your applicants put together a sentence in English?

What would you say is the key to scaling the syndication model quickly and with maximum profit, if you could pack it into a single sentence?