Look for best action responses with correct grammar.

From there it's simple grammar school math; if Johnny has 4 apples, and 10 people want apples, what kind of discount will Johnny give them? 

Also, another red flag that I shoulda noticed was his incorrect grammar with emails and texting. 

Please forgive any grammar errors.

Wright  As a tip, definitely work on your grammar for your pitch. 

I find that anything I ask it, even using poor grammar, it works.

"not to mention it's coon now for a hard money lender"=not to mention it's COMMON now for a ...My iPhone likes to re-spell my perfect grammar...

When I started to Accumulate my portfolio of Rentals for my retirement 30 years ago, the value of properties in Hillsborough County had not gone up for TEN YEARS, except for one little corner of around ten blocks down by Gandy and Bayshore Blvd. where I found one duplex with a house in front of the grammar school.

Double check it 5 times for usage, punctuation, grammar and "readability".all cash

The grammar is poor and the order of how the features and benefits are described is odd, at least to me.